Louise Hudson
The main strength of your covers are by far the masthead and this is very unique and crisp which makes it stand out on the page.
But there are a few negatives.
The first being that all of your drafts look extreemely similar which shows little improvement and progress. I also feel that the use of a medium shot was not a good one, as this gives more room for the features which on their own don't use much space. I suggest using a medium close-up, like Becky suggests, most music magazines use this type of framing on their cover and it overall just looks better.
So to sum it up, use a closeup and make the features bigger or add more features to prevent the cover from looking empty.
Hope I wasn't too harsh :)
Well done!
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