Teacher Feedback

This is the feedback from my media teacher. A few things are adressed that appeared in my peer feedback, and so must consider taking some form of action. The header and footer could do with being added as shown by the drawn scribbles. Also, the blank space on the right and the problem with the colour of the artists clothes looking like a part of the background should be something I can improve upon. On a positive the pose and general appearence of my model has worked out rather well and am happy for this. In my spare time I will make some improvements.