Peer Feedback - Joe

I like the colours you've used as it fits the genre of music your magazine is and it uses a consistancy throughout the page. You have used lots of images which is very good as contents pages do have lots of images on them which makes it looks proffesional. The main title text doesn't really work with the other text on the page so I would change that to fit the genre of your magazine. Also there are a few blank spaces around your page so fill those up with more text and images. Also you are missing a letter from the editor which would make it look more professional and fit the the genre of your magazine. Fiannly some of the images you have used are not your own, so I would take some more images to gain more marks.