Strengths: this is a good contents page, you have followed the conventions well. Your page numbers stand out against the dark background which is good. You have kept to the three colours advised to you.
Areas for improvement: I would suggest spacing the images out a bit more, and adding a few more conventions for example; plugs if you have any special offers just to fill in the emptier spaces towards the top. And the contrast of your 'features' heading could be a little brighter.
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